Cry of the Hunters
Sheer Luck
Being dead isn't as bad as I thought it would be. It is relieving, that's for sure. When I was alive, I had Jack breathing down my neck and raising my hairs; now there's no Jack to bother me. It was sad when Simon died because of Jack's hunters with their distended bellies. You'd think they would be fit as a fiddle if they were real hunters, but that is not the case with them. They are just savages that think surviving on the island is a game and that they can diddle around all they bloody want. Sorry, but that is not the way things should happen if you wish to survive. My death was not so sad, because I am in a much safer and better place. But it seemed as though Simon was happy on the island. Not with the rest of us of course, but he always had a way of making his life on the island seem peaceful. I wish I could have done that, but at least now I don't have to try.I hope that Ralph escapes Jack's bloodthirsty cordon. I'm scared for him! Jack is a monster! And since he took Samneric and I'm dead, Ralph might as well just go and drown in the sea. Either way, HE IS TOAST! If Jack or Roger catches Ralph, not only is he going to be killed...but he is going to be tortured. Jack blacklisted Ralph a long time ago, and Roger's specialty is torture and pain. Samneric are terrified of Roger because of whatever horrible thing he did to them. Ohhh...
Somebody must have prayed for a miracle if somebody found us on this godforsaken island. And what perfect timing? They were all about to turn to ashes with that fire raging out of control! I don't care for the fact that Jack n' 'em were rescued, but I am delighted by the fact that Ralph got out okay. He was my best buddy. And, he was the only other sane being on the island. Thank the Lord for the Seal with the white drill uniform. Ralph would have died if not for that man. The light reflecting off the epaulettes on the Seal's shoulder seemed to light up Ralph's bloody and sweaty face. I swear, that Navy Seal was an angel sent from God Himself if somebody actually wanted our lives to return to normal, and decided to rescue our sorry little savage butts. Sadly, I will never see my mum and dad ever again. All because of those wretched demons, Jack and Roger.
3 comments:
Maya that was great!! I really liked this part:"Jack blacklisted Ralph a long time ago, and Roger's specialty is torture and pain." It sounded really good. I also loved how you used the word"blacklisted." I made the sentence have "flavor" in it. Great job Maya!
Good job Maya, it really felt like I was in the character's shoes. The only small thing that you might want to change on this is that you didn't say anything about how Jack's tribe lit the whole island on fire which got the soldger to there.
Great job Maya. That was really good. I really like how instead of mom you put mum on the last sentence which really make it sound like it came from the character. Good job Maya.
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